I Feel Your Love

[Mr. T]

Umm.. yea i dont really write poemz but i had to do it for school, and i dont know if its bad or good so yea here it iz. oh yea if any1 has read a Walk Whitman poem/sonnet thingy youll know if its good or not.



I feel your love, much emotion yet of something so small,
One of a man pleasuring his darling lady with a rose,
One of a lion gently bathing her young cub,
One of a kiss received from his wife off to work,
One of a duet between two birds flying so freely,
One of a daughter and mother singing while soothed in a bathtub,
One of a hug exchanged by two long lost'd friends,
One of a simple phrase "I Love You" from two soulmates,
Every emotion only shared between two,
Which love belongs to one another, thus can only be broken by the other,
Loving with only their open hearts and showing emotion with something yet so little.

Tristan Haywood

Inspired By,
Walt Whitman

[Grey]

Oh wow. That's really moving. Thank you for sharing! ^.^

[Noodlehead]

That's beautiful, Tristan. Thanks very much for sharing!